Plz comment on my poem..?

Hi. Your poem is deep and very touching, strong feelings and emotions. I love the words choices between the stanzas. The topic and the form makes your poem flow nicely. You make your readers feel with you, this is very good, the images and the picture words you painted is very interesting like a story in a book. Awesome poetic persona and you have an active imagination. I'm loving the last two stanzas you summed it up wonderfully, bringing the message home. Keep this up.